Burn's World -Eve Rabi

"You never forget your first love. Burn couldn't even though she had moved on. An awesome love triangle that 'burns' and keeps you reading." Smashwords reviewer

 
 

When the school star athlete, blue-eyed, blonde haired, Brody McGraw asks her out, Burn can hardly believe her luck.

In record time they start dating and she is thrilled when she can finally change her Facebook profile status to ‘In a relationship’.

However, Brody’s mother has huge political plans for her family and she makes it clear, they do not include someone with Burn’s color.

When Burn suffers a severe bout of self-loathing because of Dawn McGraw’s words, she is forced to make a decision that will break her heart.

 

Enter Trojan Catrell, a thug and an enemy of Brody McGraw. He wants what Brody has and he pursues Burn.

Since she hankers after Brody McGraw, Burn’s not interested.

However, Trojan has no intention of taking no for an answer and a long triangle that lasts for years ensues.

 

 

Excerpt

 

When he sees me, he smiles. A sheepish smile. Again, he’s wearing a long-sleeve black shirt, dark jeans, dreads tied back, and a stud in his ear. He has no other jewellery on.

 

“What’s your pleasure, sir?” I ask notepad and pencil in hand.

 

You.

 

I smile.

 

“What do I have to do to get you to get on the bar and do a Coyote Ugly for me?”

 

I look at the ceiling, then at him. “You’d have to dance with me.”

 

“No way!” he laughs. “I’ll just have a beer.”

 

“What kind of beer, sir?”

 

He narrows his eyes at me. “You choose. Impress me.”

 

“O … kay. One ginger beer coming up.”

 

“Ginger beer? What the fuck?!”

 

“And how would you like your ginger beer, sir? Rare, medium-rare, well done …?”

 

“Lemmee think …on a long body shot.”

 

I giggle and walk away to fetch the beer. When I return, it’s with an icy-cold Stella Artois and the entire staff.

 

 

His eyes flit around. “What the …?”

 

To his absolute horror, we clap and sing Happy Birthday to him.

 

He sinks lower into his seat and eventually puts his hand over his eyes. “Burn, I’m gonna fucking kill you!” he mutters as Tong Carlos and Madonna link arms and dance around.

 

My response is to “Yip! Yip!”

 

“Hooray!” they chorus.

 

When they leave, he tries to glare at me and fails. “I’m gonna get you back for this,” he warns. sinking further into his chair. “I promise.”

 

“Whaddyamean? You want them to sing in Chinese? I can arrange …”

 

“No!”

 

“Okay, okay!”

 

“So, what are you doing here?”

 

He shrugs. “Was in the neigborhood. ‘Sides, you promised me a drink and …”

 

“Ah.”

 

“It’s my birthday on Saturday and I’m having it at Danes. I’d like you to come.”

 

I wasn’t expecting him to invite me to a party.

 

“I want you to come. Bring your friends too.”

 

“Danes? Bring my friends? Wow! Really? Man, am I impressed!”

 

He nods. “I’ll send a car for you guys.”

 

My jaw drops. He’ll send a car! This is just too good to be true. Hang on, I’m underage. Has he forgotten? Danes won’t allow me in.

 

“What? You need a written invitation or something?’

 

I shake my head. “Only one problem – my age. I tried to get fake IDs, but the guy stiffed us for our money and …”

 

“Why ya trippin’? Just be there. I got it covered.”

 

“Whaaaaat?!” I feel faint with excitement. “You can get us in? Really?”

 

“Really.”

 

“I …” Wow! My friends will worship me for life if I can get them into Danes. How do I pass on it?

 

I look at him with one eye closed. “What’s the catch?”

 

“Catch?” He thinks about it. “One body shot.”

 

“Get lost!”

 

He laughs. “I’m kidding!”

 

“No strings attached?”

 

“None whatsoever. But …this …” He wags his finger between us – it don’t count as a date. We straight?”

 

I nod. “We straight.” Hell, the dudes getting us into Danes – no more trippin’ from me.

 

“Say yes.”

 

I smile. “Yes!”

 

His turn to smile. “Cool.” He looks pleased.

 

 

About the author

Eve Rabi lives in Sydney Australia, but was born in South Africa.

 

She is the author of 20 books and is known for her kick-ass leading ladies, her alpha males and her ability to make you cry and make you laugh as you fall in love.

 

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Wendy | Reply 23.02.2014 10.52

Hey Julie. Apologies for having taken so long to come around to thank you for posting. Hve you entered the giveaway?

Julie Ryan 23.02.2014 11.49

Thanks for the reminder Wendy - have just done it x

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